koupip's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Little Forest (Feat. Films; Ambient Animation)]

what a relaxing animation.
the music goes very well with the overal scenary.
the animation is fluid and keeps the viewer entretained.
overall its a very nice short. wish it had been longer!

AnotherYojimbo responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback!

Yeah, this one I wanted to be a bit longer than the previous animation I did, but I still think its fairly short myself.

The next one I'm story-boarding right should be a bit longer as well (if everything goes as plan, lol)

["Fight now, salvage later."]

such a smooth animation ;0 i love it even if it is a little short

TheOdeity responds:

Thanks!

[Commission Time Lapse]

would it not have been better to record the whole drawing then speed it up ? anyway i like the drawing.

EDIT: oh ok i see well ill give you a higher score then

Alibaba091113 responds:

Yeah that's my plan but something went wrong on it.

[me blinking]

a tip i can give you is keep the head always at the same size it needs to be static. your head doesn't shrink when you close your eyes. and when you have a head that doesn't move on every frame then you can edit the eye to close themselves. best way to see those kind of small detail is by looking at yourself in a mirror then restranscripting those movement on paper since this is a eye closing video you should video yourself and then watch every frame and how your face moves. i say you have a much potential as anyone else to be a great artist and don't stop trying. i'm sorry i can't give you 5 stars bc the animation is pretty meh but i will give you 3 so don't stop trying so that i can rate your next animation with a 5 :D

montothesqueaks responds:

Thanks u i only posted the video to get some criticism to improve so ill be sure to use your advice